Monday, December 13, 2010

Wk 2: Journal Response Option 7


Write a name or “I Am” poem for one of the characters using the provided template. 
 
I am (two special characteristics he/she has)
I wonder (something he/she is actually curious about)
I hear (a sound from in or around the Secret Annex)
I see (in or outside of the Secret Annex)
I want (an actual desire or dream)
I am (name)

I pretend (something he/she pretends to do or be)
I feel (a feeling about a person, an event, or himself/herself)
I touch (a physical touch)
I worry (something that really bothers him/her)
I cry (something that makes him/her sad)
I am (name)

I understand (something he/she knows is true)
I say (something he/she believes in)
I dream (something he/she actually hopes for)
I try (something he/she attempts to make an effort about)
I hope (something he/she actually hopes for)
I am (name)
 

 “I Am (character name)”
I am (name)

22 comments:

  1. I am brave and smart
    I wonder if the Green Police will catch us
    I hear noises as people come by
    I see my family all hoping for freedom
    I want my family to be happy with me
    I am Mr. Frank

    I pretend to be the angel for Anne
    I feel this war is unnecessary
    I touch my children’s faces in the Annex
    I worry that my family won’t be safe
    I cry about our freedom we had
    I am Mr. Frank

    I understand we might not make it out
    I say that this war will be over
    I dream my family and I can leave peacefully
    I try to be the best leader for everyone in the annex
    I hope (something he/she actually hopes for)
    I am Mr. Frank


    “I Am Mr. Frank”
    I am Mr. Frank

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  2. I am outgoing and friendly
    I wonder how long it will take until we are free.
    I hear mostly silence during the day
    I see Mr. Vandan sneaking the food
    I want the war to end
    I am Anne Frank

    I pretend to stay happy even though hiding and staying quiet is hard
    I feel lonely in the secret annex
    I touch my diary
    I worry that we may run out of food
    I cry about leaving my dear cat
    I am Anne Frank

    I understand that hiding is very serious
    I say that I love daddy more then mommy but that isn’t true sometimes she doesn’t understand me
    I dream scary nightmares
    I try to be the good Anne but sometimes end up being the bad Anne
    I hope that one day we won’t be in hiding
    I am Anne Frank


    “I Am (Anne Frank)”

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  3. I am young and hyper
    I wonder when the war will end
    I hear airplanes dropping carpets of bombs
    I see Jews being taken away against their will
    I want to get out of here
    I am Anne Frank

    I pretend to act adult-like
    I feel annoyed by Dussel
    I touch the cigarettes I gave to Mr. VanDaan
    I worry THEY will find us
    I cry when everyone tells me to act more like margot
    I am Anne Frank

    I understand we have to stay in the annex
    I say we should be let out
    I dream that that war would end
    I try to lighten the mood
    I hope we will all survive

    "I am Anne Frank"
    (Justin Huang)

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  4. I am loud, but caring
    I wonder what is going on outside
    I hear the people in the office
    I see the tree and night sky
    I want to see my friends
    I am Anne Frank

    I pretend to be happy in the annex
    I feel trapped
    I touch my window
    I worry my family and I will get caught
    I cry over the nightmares I have
    I am Anne Frank

    I understand what we are going through
    I say that being Jewish is great
    I dream I will be able to go home
    I try to lift everyones spirits
    I hope that Jopie is still at her house
    I am Anne Frank

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  5. I am outgoing and fun-loving.
    I wonder why my mother always compares me to my older sister Margot.
    I hear the wind mixed with children laughter.
    I see a slight peek of the sun shining in from the one window in my room.
    I want people to stop comparing me to my older sister Margot and except me for who I am.
    I am Anne Frank.


    I pretend I am in a dream world to keep all the bad thoughts out of my head.
    I feel Peter is a nice boy, who I would like to get to know better and doing so without being made fun of by family.
    I touch the surface of my smooth paper in my diary.
    I worry day and night that we will be found, captured, and sent to a concentration camp.
    I cry over my disagreements and arguments with my mother.
    I am Anne Frank.


    I understand why we need to act great gingerly actions.
    I say that we will not be found to myself to keep hope.
    I dream that there will once again be peace in the world for people discriminated like us.
    I try to write my feelings out in my journal instead of having a hissy fit.
    I hope it will all be over soon.
    I am Anne Frank.


    “I Am Anne Frank.”
    I am Anne Frank.

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  6. I am loud and hopeful.
    I wonder what it is like on the outside.
    I hear a thump from underneath the Secret Annex.
    I see a bit of the sidewalk on the outside.
    I want to have someone to play with in the Secret Annex.
    I am Anne Frank.

    I pretend to be an adult around my mother.
    I feel my mother doesn’t understand me.
    I touch Peter’s pet cat Mouschi.
    I worry that I will be taken away.
    I cry when I awaken from my nightmares.
    I am Anne Frank.

    I understand things are getting worse on the outside.
    I say I am an adult to my mother.
    I dream for things to get better.
    I try to make Hanukah special for everyone.
    I hope for the war to end soon.
    I am Anne Frank


    “I Am Anne Frank”
    I am Anne Frank

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  7. I am loud and rambunctious
    I wonder when the war will end
    I hear my thoughts from 9am to 6pm everyday
    I see boards nailed on the windows
    I want to hang out with Jopie
    I am Anne Frank

    I pretend to be fearless
    I feel trapped
    I touch my head to my pillow each night in fear of being caught
    I worry that we will get caught
    I cry when I have nightmares
    I am Anne Frank

    I understand that at any moment in the day we can get caught
    I say that he war will end
    I dream that we will be free
    I try to be less in peoples business
    I hope that all Jewish people will be free one day
    I am Anne Frank


    “I Am Anne Frank”
    I am Anne Frank

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  8. Anne

    I am talkative and fun.
    I wonder what has gone on after the day is done.
    I hear no sound.
    I see the house to which I am bound.
    I want to be able to do what I can
    I am Anne.

    I pretend we are all the same
    I feel like life is just one big game
    I touch my diary
    I worry that every day will leave me with an inquiry
    I cry that I will never be all that I can
    I am Anne.

    I understand to be quiet most of day and all of night
    I say what I think is right
    I dream that Jews will be welcome, that the clouds give way to sun
    I try to be strong, for I know soon it will be done
    I hope life will go on the way I do plan.
    I am Anne.

    I am Anne.

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  9. Anne

    I am fearless and positive
    I wonder why we are still in hiding.
    I hear the daily dispute between Mr. and Mrs. Van Daan
    I see the various posters upon my wall
    I want my mother to accept me
    I am Anne

    I pretend that Margot’s personality doesn’t bother me
    I feel uncomfortable with Mr. Dussel
    I touch the cover of my diary
    I worry for Jopie
    I cry of the news from Mr. Kraler
    I am Anne

    I understand that I often hurt my mother
    I say that I do have a nice side, but it is hidden
    I dream one day my mean side will subside
    I try to lighten up the annex room
    I hope Peter and I will become closer
    I am Anne

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  10. I am smart and pretty.
    I wonder what it’s like to have someone to talk to like how Anne has Peter.
    I hear the telephone ringing downstairs.
    I see a small canal outside Anne’s window.
    I want someone to talk to.
    I am Margot.
    I pretend to be perfect.
    I feel lonely.
    I touch the gross medicine to stop my cough from being heard.
    I worry if all hope will be lost for freedom.
    I cry when I think the Green Police have actually come to take us away.
    I am Margot.
    I understand that we have to hide in here for as long as it takes till its safe outside, in the world.
    I say we should accept what might come our way, no matter how dreadful it is.
    I dream to have freedom once again.
    I try to act respectful and courteous to the other Annex residents.
    I hope I will live through this.
    I am Margot.

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  11. I am curious and outgoing
    I wonder my future and my friends
    I hear the planes overhead
    I see the once filled empty streets
    I want to leave this place
    I am Anne Frank

    I pretend we are going to be fine
    I feel sad for the people I knew
    I touch the cat I had
    I worry about what will happen to us
    I cry when the nights haunt my dreams and thoughts
    I am Anne Frank

    I understand we will be here for a long time
    I say what I believe and feel like saying
    I dream that I am captured and sent away
    I try to only show my good side
    I hope Peter will talk to me
    I am Anne Frank


    “I am Anne Frank”
    I am Anne Frank

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  12. I am brave and courageous.
    I wonder what Peter thinks of me.
    I hear people downstairs.
    I see beautiful nature outside.
    I want to be famous.
    I am Anne.

    I pretend to be famous.
    I feel confused about myself.
    I touch my father and embrace him.
    I worry about getting caught by the Nazis.
    I cry about who I am and why I am that way.
    I am Anne.

    I understand that I must cooperate with everybody I live with.
    I say that I am nothing like my sister.
    I dream to live on after my death.
    I try to get along with my mother.
    I hope to not get caught by the Nazis.
    I am Anne.

    "I am Anne Frank."
    I am Anne.

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  13. I am unspoken, untold
    I wonder about Anne, the poor child
    I hear nothing but utter silence
    I see nothing but anger in the air
    I want to get away from it all
    I am Peter

    I pretend I can fly as far away as possible
    I feel agrrivated by those who question me
    I touch the peeling paint in my "bedroom"
    I worry about the others, not about myself
    I cry out to Miep for my beloved Moushi
    I am Peter

    I understand only myself
    I say not but two words to anyone else
    I dream of an absolution
    I try to keep as far from the others as possible
    I hope to get away...from it all
    I am Peter

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  14. I am quite and not smart.
    I wonder if Anne likes me.
    I hear my parents fighting.
    I see my cat, Moushi.
    I want freedom.
    I am Peter VanDaan.

    I pretend to study.
    I feel ingored.
    I touch Moushi's soft fur.
    I worry if we will be found.
    I cry because I lost Moushi.
    I am Peter VanDaan.

    I understand why we are hiding.
    I say the war will end soon.
    I dream about Anne.
    I try to act strong.
    I hope Anne likes me the same way I like her.
    I am Peter VanDaan.

    "I am Peter VanDaan."
    I am Maggie Carroll

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  15. I am pim and peter
    I wonder if I will ever be beautiful
    I hear Mr. and Mrs. Van Daan fighting
    I see the beauty of nature from my only window
    I want to be back at my school playing with Jopie
    I am Anne


    I pretend to be Peter sometimes to mess with him
    I feel at ease when I talk to Peter
    I touch my ugly hair, wanting it to be nice
    I worry if we will ever get out of here
    I cry thinking of my dear friend Jopie dying
    I am Anne


    I understand that I must be quiet here
    I say we need to be optimistic
    I dream to have a better relationship with my mom
    I try to have a positive spirit
    I hope I will be happy in my life
    I am Anne

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  16. I am exuberant and ever changing
    I wonder when the war will end
    I hear bands begin to play
    I see blue sky and fluffy white clouds
    I want to live even after death
    I am Anne

    I pretend to stroll through the park
    I feel gratitude towards Peter
    I touch my fathers hand as we dance, round and round
    I cry over the unfairness of it all
    I worry over the disappearance of Jopie
    I am Anne
    I understand our situation
    I say that people really are good hearted
    I dream to be outside
    I try to not alienate mother
    I hope to keep the bad Anne in
    I am Anne

    I am Anne
    I am Anne

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  17. I am short and childish
    I wonder when the war is going to end
    I hear the buzz of the bell
    I see the canal out of the window
    I want to be with Peter
    I am Anne Frank

    I pretend to be free and out of the Secret Annex
    I feel attracted to Peter Van Daan
    I touch my diary
    I worry the Nazis will find us in our hiding place
    I cry when I make my mother feel bad
    I am Anne Frank

    I understand we have to stay quiet during the day
    I say we are free in our minds
    I dream we will all be free of this place when the war is over
    I try to make everyday better
    I hope we will be free soon
    I am Anne Frank
    “I Am Anne Frank”

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  18. I am talkative and energetic
    I wonder if Peter likes me more than just a friend
    I hear Mr. and Mrs. Vaan Dan fighting
    I see Margot being an angel
    I want my mother to understand me
    I am Anne Frank

    I pretend I don't really like Peter
    I feel my mother treats me like a baby
    I touch my pen to my journal
    I worry if the Nazi's will find us
    I cry when I have a nightmare about my fears
    I am Anne Frank

    I understand I am not the smartest person, when it comes to Algebra
    I say my opinion is always correct
    I dream to the war to be over
    I try to keep my hopes up about the war
    I hope everyone gets what they really want for Hanukkah (which is why I gave them presents)
    I am Anne Frank

    “I Am Anne”
    I am Anne Frank

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  19. I Am Anne

    I am curious, and loud
    I wonder how long we will have to hide.
    I hear the sound of yelling and screaming
    I see loneliness
    I want to be a wrier
    I am Anne

    I pretend to love my mother
    I feel loved by my father
    I touch mrs. Van daan
    I worry about my mother
    I cry about Jopie
    I am Anne

    I understand we might get caught
    I say what I feel
    I dream about my future
    I try to be like Margot
    I hope we will be free
    I am Anne

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  20. I am strong and loyal
    I wonder what is happening to my friends
    I hear silence in the annex
    I see the somber faces of my family
    I want to leave the annex and be free
    I am Anne

    I pretend I am elsewhere
    I feel life is not fair
    I touch Mouschi for comfort
    I worry that I will be caught
    I cry at the thought of being found
    I am Anne

    I understand the Nazis are trying to kill the Jews
    I say the Jews will one day be free
    I dream to be free from the tyranny
    I try to believe that one day, I will be free
    I hope to live a normal life
    I am Anne

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  21. Anne

    I am Stubborn and Spontaneous
    I wonder when we are going to get out of the Annex
    I hear Sounds of people stomping up and down the street
    I see My family and friends temper flaring
    I want to be a writer when I grow up
    I am Anne

    I pretend to be happy where I am
    I feel that Peter is missing something so greatly
    I touch The rotten food lying on my plate, knowing this is all I have
    I worry that some will find us in hiding
    I cry At night hoping someday, someone will understand
    I am Anne

    I understand That whatever happens, we still have each other
    I say some things i don't mean, so I am not walked on by others
    I dream That we will be saved and everything will go back to normal
    I try To be the best I can be, and make everyone realize that I can be excellent
    I hope Dussel stops hogging the W.C.
    I am Anne

    "I am Anne"

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  22.  
    I am loud and rude
    I wonder if we will ever get caught
    I hear the robber down stairs
    I see my pictures on the wall
    I want to see Jopie
    I am Anne

    I pretend everything is okay on Hanukah
    I feel we will be caught
    I touch Mouchi
    I worry the green police will be hear any moment
    I cry during my nightmares
    I am Anne

    I understand we have to be quiet at night
    I say we should be happy on Hanukah
    I dream to get out of hear
    I try to get along with my mother
    I hope Jopie is alright
    I am Anne

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